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TAINTED

a mere shadow of innocence,
overlooking the present obsolete.
with so much emotional intensity,
the past can hardly withdtand.
a fate twisted on reality,
with no statures or morales om which to stand.
just like being jagged and jaded,
situations with no understandings.
extreme and faded,
bloody overpowering.
to much to go against,
a change so sudden and abrupt.
actions that you can't take back,
feelinga of regrets that attack.
a life misunderstood;
with no perfection,
even if i wanted to!
hidden with mistakes,
torn in the storm of haste.
a crude pisture of wasted examples of a bitter life.

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  1. Date: 6/29/2012 6:15:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Donn. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/29/2012