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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:06:00 AM
    Hello!!! dear tristen :) thanks for your lovely review and then i came here and found this exceptionally perceptive and heartwarming write.... im so glad i did... its gorgeous....thanks karen

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Brought on the wonderful emotions that well up as you gaze upon your newborn! What joy that is mine that has been brought into the world! Thanks for helping me to revisit this wonderful experience! Look forward to reading more!

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 6:32:00 PM
    i remember the first time my step daughter hid behind my leg. oh what a feeling that was. it was then that i was a daddy for the first time.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 7:51:00 PM
    I remember the first time I laid eyes on my child, a memory filled with a breathless amazement to think that here is a part of me. Thanks for this lovely memory,Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Very emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Is there a new one in your family or is this just about a topic?..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 9:01:00 AM
    to be the apple of ones eye is precious tristen luv .. a lovely write extolling this thought.. this ideal of perfect love.. my hand is outstretched for u to shower with kisses my fair knight.. Camelot is my favorite play and movie too.. luv..

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 9:22:00 PM
    : ))Ah, this is special, Tristen! Love it. Love, annalise

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 3:58:00 PM
    charming write.. a babe is god's gift!... lovely one,tristen... blessing and huggs!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 3:55:00 PM
    charming write.. a babe is god's gift!... lovely one,tristen... blessing and huggs!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 3:20:00 PM
    When you kiss a child's check, you touch an angel dream.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 2:18:00 PM moving, and it - Well written,like it very much. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 9:45:00 AM
    Very touching write! Lori

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Wow, the power of this message leaves me breathless Tristen! I am in awe of the beauty and creativity of this fine poem! I am glad I had the opportunity to read this incredible write today! Great Work!!