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Please Wake from this Nighmare

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Please Wake from this Nighmare

Note: This is a duet...it is based off a story I'm writing with LAURA! :D
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V1 person1 Can you hear me… Please open your eyes, look at me I wish to hear your voice again, I don’t want to see you like this…anymore Please, darling, please open your eyes… [chorus] (both) What's happened to you... Where have you gone This must all be a dream I'm stuck in a nightmare And I want it all to end What's happened to you Where have you gone Please wake from this nightmare (after first time through the chorus change 'this' to your for rest of chorus) V2(person 2) I'm sorry... Can you hear me I'm sorry, I never meant to hurt you This is all my fault I'm sorry Please wake again [corus] (both) V3 (person 1) Hang in there, Don't leave me alone I need you Please don't leave me I love you (person 2 (still V3)) I'm sorry, please stay with us Please, I'm sorry (both) Don't leave us here alone... (person 1) I Love you (I'm sorry! (person 2)) [chorus] [instrumental break] V4(person 2) My dear friend Please don't leave Wake up... Wake up from your dream! (person 1) Darling, I love you please stay here, don't leave m I need you (both) Wake up from this nightmare you're trapped inside Find you're way through the maze [instrumental break again] V5 (one) What's happened to you (the other) Where have you gone (first one again) Wake up from your dream (the other) Escape this nightmare of yours... [chorus] (both) What's happened to you Where have you gone? Please come back to us...

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  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:39:00 AM
    It's really a sweet lyric, a bit sad but the warmth of love can be felt for sure. Great write...really enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 6:36:00 PM
    MOOOOOSE! <3 I like of course. ;) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 10:18:00 PM
    Nice lyric...enjoyed!!!

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:47:00 PM
    nice work .thank you for sharing .jk