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THE TORNADO

destruction lies in its wake
matchbox houses whirled about
we huddle in our bathtub
and wait for the train

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  1. Date: 6/28/2012 5:16:00 AM

    yeah,very scary.Clear in four lines

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:19:00 PM

    Scary situation. Wonderful tanka. I really like your last line. Great work. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 4:19:00 PM

    How true, that's exactly what happens during the tornado. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 3:50:00 PM

    An ominous picture you have penned. Peace and blessings.