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I tried

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I tried

I wanted to make you happy, 
I truly did, I tried!
But my love you through away, 
and a river of tears I cried.

You promised me forever, 
but broke my heart instead.
I thought you wanted marriage, 
but I was sadly mislead.

You would never hurt me, 
blindly i believed this true.
But I should have known better, 
then to ever trust you!

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  1. Date: 6/30/2012 12:48:00 AM
    This is so sad. I hope you will find true love soon.

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 5:44:00 AM
    You will find true love - then you will be happy. - well written Amanda - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 5:07:00 AM
    This happens sometimes and we feel betrayed.But after every sunset,there is a sunrise.So,keep smiling