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MY SNOW WHITE CATIE LINDSEY

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MY SNOW WHITE CATIE LINDSEY

Angel of mourning soup
Angel of mourning
Who gives birth to fresh morning dew who 
helped me pursue who showed me the light
when I was lost for clues in times of blues

Angel of assistance
From were did you fall
From heaven?
From where did you fall
From where did you
hear my call
I wanted to say thank you
that's all
that's all
You are the fairest of
them all and you don't
need to ask the damn
mirror on the wall.

You helped me build the ladder of saul but the others
couldn't help because they couldn't speak our language
at all and so if I ever fall I know you will be there to 
pick me up like a pen like a friend  I wish I can give 
you the sun but I am young enough to be your son 
so I give to you the stars of friendship ,I can feel your 
breeze its it make me want to fall to my knees and never
cease to rain my gratification on your being because what
I have been seeing is a lending hand when many ran I 
guess that's what separates a rock from a grain of sand 
size of heart so were should I start.  


Let me fill your shopping cart with the immensity 
of this poem so when you get to the cash register
 of  heavens doorway you can show em your appreciated
 hearts receipt  you have given more than I can take  
you have dotted my I's and crossed my t's you are the
 rain to my tree the beautiful shells in my sea the form 
of my key the correction and assistance of me the blue jay 
at dawn singing to me the heat to my tea the caps for my
 knee you are the back up stinger of this bee so tell me 
honey what you see because I see the better half of me 
may our friendship never cease catie please you are the
 cat and I am the flea don't you ever scratch me because
 friends tolerate the most annoying  things of each other so
 let the itch be any way I don't think the vet's can separate 
you and me there's just to much chemistry.


Angel of assistance
From were did you fall
From heaven?
From where did you fall
from where did you
hear my call
I wanted to say thank you
that's all
that's all
You are the fairest
of them all and you
don't need to ask the
damn mirror on the wall.

I will take the poison apple out
 of your hand and take the fall
You are the fairest
 of them all and you
don't need to ask the
damn mirror on the wall.

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 12:16:00 AM
    "Woww we, very deeply and intensely done Elliot superb!!!! Carma xoxo

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 3:30:00 AM
    this is simply amazing!

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 3:54:00 PM
    WOW!

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 12:58:00 AM
    Elliott, this is a FANTASTIC dedication! Man, you went somewhere really deep with this poem. Great to see.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:30:00 AM
    wow. what a sweet tribute to catie! isn't it nice when you connect to someone like this? :)

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 5:44:00 PM
    beautiful'

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 5:55:00 AM
    Oh, Elliott, this is so beautiful, Thank you so much. I a, putting it in my favs, so I can come back to it often. Thanks Sweetie. you're the best! Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:30:00 AM
    Nicely done and very well written....briliant Elliott !!! Love Angel to my friend. "I wanted to say thank you....that`s all...." - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:00:00 AM
    good poetic mix of contemporary and semi-classic tones, really experimental and inventive, elliott... cates will like this!... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 10:49:00 PM
    very nice