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MOSES OF ROSES

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MOSES OF ROSES

The clouds cried passionately
The streets took a shower  
I poured me some whiskey to drink
To drink think to link the
droplets and form an image.

My bed room window was foggy I rubbed it
with my sleeve but it slightly appeared again
when I breath.

From a distance I saw a rose it began to
appear close it was soaked the wetness 
seemed to intensify every petal the rose 
was spinning happily in the rain skipping
 making beats of its own I watched its 
thorns fall as it set its self free trying 
to escape every last bee.

I walked outside introducing my self she said
let me guess your a bee she giggled have you
come to pollinate me I am sorry I won't just 
make your temporary honey.

I said no I am a gardener who never cuts 
his roses stem for a bouquet the gardener
who waters his roses I am the moses of 
roses the gardener who removes the dead
leaves I won't be like those bees who simply 
come and leave I will wear your petals on my sleeves.

I am the gardener who counts the petals on
his rose the gardener who cherishes inhaling
the sent of the rose up his nose and guides it
as it grows  the gardener who lifts the roses
head up when the rain pours down on its crown 
and makes it frown in my garden you'll be safe and sound.

The gardener who counts the thorns
the gardener who removes the weeds 
and never fails to plant a good seed a
gardener catering to his flowers every need.

The gardener who loosens the soil so the 
roots may grow plating them in the right 
spot so the sun they will soak.

She said hmmm sound like miracle grow.

I said at least you know.

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:56:00 PM
    wow so passionate.. too bad roses only bloom once year..:)

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 8:26:00 PM
    I feel like your rose,when I came to the Soup you were one of my great inspiration,you still are keep giving us these great poems Elliot Moses

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 7:17:00 AM
    cute poem, Moses! :) Soupmail! Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 6:36:00 AM
    You make me wish I was a Rose in your garden Elliott, please read my poem I posted it this morning it's called A Violet Rose it is not as elaborate as yours, but just the same I think we were on the same wave length this morning, sending my luv always, vie