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  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:03:00 PM
    I've read this 3 times and don't want to leave it. The first stanza unique, solike an echo and the rest of it sweeps me away. Can't find a rating high enough!

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 3:44:00 PM
    Deep stuff, John. I can get into the window shattering thing, when one cannot conceive ever looking out at the world in the same way. Like this one very much. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 12:35:00 AM
    You really got me thinking with this one? Very nice! It makes me want to read it over&over again....

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 5:56:00 PM
    In deeds I shall...peace and blessings my friend.