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Life as a Living Ghost

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Life as a Living Ghost

Deafening whispers as I Scream,
Cast aside off-screen,

Used only as a backspace,
Just to aid in your pace,
Rock bottom doesn't even begin,
Thought of nothing more than just a mannequin,

Unanchored with no directive, 
Hopelessly optimistic to find an objective,

Regrettably knowing the sad truth,
Clenching my ticket waiting to cash it the booth,

Where the ticket masters grin is so cynical,
Taking my seat as it all becomes visible,
Walls begin to gawk at me with glutenous eyes,


Seeing now     it as all just a clever disguise.

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:59:00 PM
    ... MIND blown.

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 12/15/2012 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I appreciate all the positive feedback :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:09:00 PM
    Ty no price to his ingenuity, he walks among us, a poet of valor, please write another soon, sending my gratitude, vie

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 9/21/2012 3:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 6:45:00 AM
    You have a unique voice. Your words draw the reader deeper into the story you are telling. I, too, will be back for more!

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 9/14/2012 2:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I will try and get more out.
  1. Date: 7/9/2012 1:41:00 AM
    Hi Ty belaeted welcome to the soup, i like this and will be back to read more for sure, all the best Owen

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 7/19/2012 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, im happy to hear you liked it :D
  1. Date: 6/26/2012 8:35:00 PM
    need some disguise remover,lol,nice write Ty

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 6/26/2012 10:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, and yea that wouldve been helpful haha.