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Arise

Hitched breath beholding hallowed eyes,
Witnessing the beauty which doth arise.
A vast zenith of forget-me-not blue,
A countenance unfolds within the hue.
Softly come upon gossamer prism wings,
Thou expression but in beauty sings.
Mystique sunrise art thine ardent eyes,
Witnessing the beauty which doth arise.
Thou whisper akin to balmy breeze,
Mine chest but entombed doth seize.
Keep naught absolution from mine prayer,
Thou blessed assurance canst compare.
O iniquitous of mine transgressions sleep,
Residing assuredly in heavenly keep.

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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:36:00 PM

    Congrats, Lisa. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:06:00 AM

    A wonderful use of old English in this powerful poem Lisa!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 7:30:00 PM

    Lisa, I got one word for you.... "CONGRATULATIONS!" ;-)...PD

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placing in Brian's "#190"contest Lisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:10:00 PM

    Wonderful write,Lisa. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:52:00 PM

    Tis a real beauty...glad it was appreciated all over AGAIN! Can't get enough of your thees and thous, girl! Congrats! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 1:03:00 PM

    And in heaven he keeps thy heart securely fit in his name sake, congrats my sweet Lisa on your winning poem, hugs vie

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Lisa congrats on your win, great write..David

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Very sonnet sounding, Lisa. congrats on your win in brian's contest. Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:13:00 AM

    Congrats Lisa on the win!Beautiful poem!

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:22:00 PM

    Congrats. This is a great poem and I liked the use of "old English" to set the tone of the poem.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 2:00:00 PM

    charming write by your magical, flowing pen, lisa.. sweet cheers to you for the splendid win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 10:31:00 AM

    Wow, beautiful!! Congratulations, Lisa, on your wonderful win! :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 8:59:00 AM

    Congrats on the win;!! Jag

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:41:00 AM

    You have a talent to make every poem a classic.....something like I would find in a wonderful old book of poetry! Congratulations once again!

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:08:00 PM

    lisa, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 11:34:00 AM

    Lisa,,,,another outstanding win...enjoyed your English syntax so much....it's like an ole King James Version of the Bible that I read....gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 9:10:00 AM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:45:00 PM

    wonderful piece Lisa, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:32:00 PM

    It reads almost like a sonnet. Great flow and imagery, Lisa. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Lisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 9:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Lisa

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on a winning poem. Beautiful rhyming images.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first place in Brian's contest, Lisa!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 1:47:00 AM

    Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:36:00 PM

    ..."Tis Sooo Many Gifted & Beautiful Poetess' Of Wonderful & Classical Rhymes Here In This Lovely Habitat Called Poetry Soup, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Lisa * You Loveliness Would Most Surely Be One Of They & I Love Song In These Notes ... Come To Me My Love; Atop The Keys We Shall Sing & Dance; 'Beautiful, Luv,'" Tristen :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:22:00 PM

    Neatly rhymed with a pleasing flow. and such an uplifting, (at least to me!) message! Well done, Lisa!! Blessings and Hugs, Keith :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:12:00 PM

    It is so nice to read quality poetry tonight, I am writing rubbish tonight, God forgive me I feel like the little boy in home alone who says, "Mom, look at me I'm watching rubbish" I think I will call it an early night, sending you my love, and sweet thoughts of you, xxxxVie