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The Weight of Oh

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The Weight of Oh

She frantically waits--
desperately trying to negate
all negative thoughts,
thinking that it would be negative,
should be negative

She steps inside
and listens to what he has to say...
One word:
          Positive

and all she can say is,
"Oh"
as her hopes all crash to zero.



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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:44:00 PM

    Hmmm...very interesting write here. You have a flare all your own. And yep, I'm sure I remember you now...forgive me...too many knocks to the head...haha. And yeah, my avatar was camo then, too. I'm the resident painted hunter!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:16:00 PM

    thought provoking write, my friend - and so good to hear from you. Hope you post more poems on Soup soon

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 3:28:00 PM

    Hi Nikko, a big swing in outcomes here, makes me wonder what happened.

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 7:10:00 AM

    Umm..you clever you,Nikko.Definitely a poem that makes my thoughts work.Glad to see your inspiration is back,mine has returned too! Hope it stays a little longer this time:-) Have a great weekend my dear friend!Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:45:00 PM

    Hi, again, Nikko. Sure love how you did this poem!!!

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 1:29:00 AM

    Oh yes, you asked me a question about the colour? Yes it is cerise, you still got it! :D

    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels Date: 6/26/2012 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh and thank you for the compliment.. I am so scattered at the moment lol
  1. Date: 6/26/2012 1:01:00 AM

    Missy this can be reflective of so many different scenarios in life especially in the times we live in today.. I just love this!! Hope your week is a great one.. Is it still raining over there? *mwahugs*

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 10:47:00 AM

    is this about being pregnant? Or finding out you have a terminal illness? I like how the reader could interpret this - so much emotion here :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:46:00 PM

    I agree, a very clever poem here Nikko and just saying hello to you as well. I hope you're weekend was spectacular. Hugs and love always, Gail

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:19:00 PM

    VERY nice, Nikko. the one time when you do NOt want to hear the word Positive. VERY clever. What made you think of this?

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 5:58:00 PM

    Very clever title. Hope all is well. The word Oh - so simple convey volumes - at times. - Gail

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 4:15:00 PM

    Peace and blessings with this understand my friend.

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 3:00:00 PM

    Wow, what a powerful message you have presented here Nikko! I really enjoyed the shocking value of the word 'Oh'! Awesome write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 2:45:00 PM

    WOW THIS SPEAKS HIGH VOLUMES!!! STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!!!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 2:39:00 PM

    You know how to do it!! : ) Yay! your muse is coming back! I love this poem, Nikko! Keep them coming! Ruben.

    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 6/24/2012 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope it's fictional!
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 2:36:00 PM

    I am envisioning some sort of medical test? Negative is usually much better! Hugs, Catie :)