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The Snake

There once was a couple, called Adam and Eve Who a little joke they did conceive They told all, that as they walked They met a snake that talked But the plan backfired when it was believed.

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  1. Date: 7/11/2012 1:00:00 PM

    What a strange begining for the human race! I believe it must be taken metaphorically. Fuuny stuff! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

    Duddle Avatar Ken Duddle Date: 7/11/2012 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Depends on if you believe the original story. Read The Original Sin. It's kinda on the same subject. I have a satirical sense of humour.. Thanks for the feedback.
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Well done Limerick and funny to....like it Ken. - oxox Anne-Lise