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Stars that Form Intimacy

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Stars that Form Intimacy

May the stars form intimacy We believe the dreams they create Their sincere glow will become ours Sparkles of ecstasy
Russell Sivey Modified Dodoistsu 8/8/8/6 Instead of Traditional 7/7/7/5

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  1. Date: 6/25/2012 8:58:00 PM
    An interesting idea, stars forming intimacy by creating dreams and glow!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 4:19:00 PM
    Russell, your modified Dodoistsu, was amazing to read... very sensual... love the passion... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 11:31:00 AM
    lovely write, Russell - and a clever new form of dodoitsu too

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:55:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:37:00 AM
    It has been a pleasure to read such a wonderful poem!! Lori

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 12:51:00 AM
    Wonderful write by you Russell.Love it!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 10:11:00 PM
    sparkles of ecstacy , great finish ...great poetry...good-oh mate