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DON'T LET HER GO

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DON'T LET HER GO

If I had a chance to say I love you

Then I would
Then I would

If I had chance
If had a chance again

If I had a chance to say I love you

Then I would
Then I would

If I had chance
If had a chance again



Before she walked out the door
She screamed and threw glass on
 the floor she said I hate you I said
 I hate you more she said I am never
 coming back I said well now I am glad for sure

She looked me in my eyes
I looked her in her eyes
And we wondered if our
Words were truth or lie
She started to cry she tryed
To hold tears back so she
Rubbed her eyes and walked
Threw the door

I grabbed the broom and 
swept the glass on the floor 
I heard three gun shots then
I opened the door and
there she was on the floor...
it was her jealous ex boyfriend
 she didn't want him no more...

I kneeled in her blood streaming on
 the floor,and lifted her lifeless body off the floor

I Said come back baby
Come back I won't say
Those harsh things any more

Come back baby
Come back why the
hell did you go
Out that door
Out that door

Please get off the floor
Let's go in side

Her soul was no longer inside

If I had a chance to say I love you

Then I would
Then I would 

If I had chance
If had a chance again

If I had a chance to say I love you

Then I would
Then I would

If I had chance
If had a chance again

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 6:49:00 PM
    Interesting! very esquiste choice of words. I sense a great deal of emotion and sensitiveness awesome in poetry.

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 10:44:00 AM
    great write Elliot,great write bro

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:06:00 AM
    Elliott! Been there; DONE THIS TOO! An aching heart authored this poem or one that has known an ache at some time or another...Repetition is so very effective as your imaginary exclamation marks...sincerely enjoyed! gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:53:00 PM
    I think you need to write a sequel to this Elliot, write a poem on how you survived without her, a love letter to her telling her how sorry you are that you didn't get a chance to tell her I Love You, pwetty please, with sugar on top, hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:14:00 PM
    WOW! This is so emotive, my friend! Very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 6:58:00 PM
    A very sad story! I liked how you began and ended it with the refrain of voicing regret. Strong feelings!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 4:49:00 PM
    So very sad, we don't allways get second chances, love elizabeth