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Will You

Will you give me, the love I so desire
To be with me, it is required
There is no games, so please do not play
If you mess up, I will not stay

Will you give me all your trust
No maybe, it is a must
I will cross the desert, and the sea
That's only if you are good to me

Will you be a hundred with me
If you do, I will do the same
Always truthful, about everything
And I will actually know why I came

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  1. Date: 6/26/2012 9:23:00 AM

    Nice poem!!

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 9:45:00 PM

    a unique romantic poem that reveals the depth of affection with the beloved .thank you for sharing .jk

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:43:00 AM

    Romantic and passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Couples who have a happy marriage live to a very old age..You are on the right track..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 5:35:00 PM

    lovely verse, love elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 4:14:00 PM

    Forever love.....lovely poem Tassha. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Jones Avatar Tarsha Jones Date: 6/23/2012 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 3:31:00 PM

    hope you get all the love that you so desire,my friend tarsha like your poem well done

    Jones Avatar Tarsha Jones Date: 6/23/2012 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 3:28:00 PM

    No ! but a very sexy piece !!