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See Me

Well its been another one of those long,and troublesome days My heart has been twisted,and squeased in so many ways Words I've read,caused many hidden tears to flow Will this pain cause my death? I really don't know? All the darkness so many people are trying to hide Makes my stomach churn,causing pain deep inside I wish I could help all of them,reach out with my hand Let them know whole heartedly,that I do understand I want them all to see me,and know that I'm right here To help them with their pain,and take away their fear I wouldn't care if it would end my life,right now here on earth I'd be able to show them at least,their lives truly have worth
Dan Kearley:6-23-12

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:32:00 AM

    an oldie i read here, what a gem Dan, truly an inspiration to this reader...thank you

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:20:00 AM

    very compassionate! just to play devil's advocate, would you give your life for a child molester, a rapist, or a murderer? If so, what if it didn't change them or save them? Would you still do it?

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 12:13:00 AM

    Dan, wow! The fearless act of true nature... If one could truly see... your words have much depth...pd

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 3:34:00 PM

    Awwww, Dan. This was such a sweet poem! (: You always cheer me up with your beautiful poetry and your smiling comments. Take care and thank you! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 11:24:00 AM

    Hi Dan great to drop in and find such words of inspiration, sometimes a helping hand from brother to brother is helpful, be back again soon my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Hi Friend, sorry for my delayed response to your work but been out of electricity, I was trying to com you went the power flickered, I was out for 3 days, all my family that live in the country they said the 7th, I kind of feel guilty being having all the conviences now at times. But I live quite the distance and cannot help them, but they are pulling together, my brother has a generator. laundromats are a frenzy, I know how to wash em by hand. Good poetry as always, love ya brother/friend, Lu

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 9:16:00 PM

    this shows great love and compassion from you. You must have a beautiful soul, Dan.

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 9:56:00 AM

    Love that 2nd line. You seem like a very caring, compassionate person :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:01:00 PM

    Love your poem Dan, and I guess we were thinking same thing at time of writing, so many simularities, just like me, we hope to make a change in other peoples hearts and give them hope for living,,,love debra

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 3:55:00 PM

    very nice poem dan ,writing is such a joy ,and when we write from our hearts it can bring hope to some one who reads it at the right time

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 10:35:00 AM

    lovely words Dan..sharing this message so inspirational.. when we see God we see Life in all its glory.. excellent write on the virtues of believing luv..

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Amen brother. Please read "walking with my heart wide open" I think it will make you see me. Smile, have a wonderful day, its beautiful, mild and sunny, blue sky, just got the birds singing in harmony at the break...ah. just pretty. take care of yourself, my loving friend, and I know you would do all these things if you could. Cindy

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 9:45:00 AM

    touched,great write Dan,keep going like the energiser bunny,lol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Your compassionate nature comes through vividly in this poem, Dan. I can relate to you in that I hate to see people hurting and would like to make things better. Nice write. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 5:04:00 AM

    Excellent poem. Well penned. tfs

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 4:50:00 AM

    You have a BIG heart Dan !!! - Well written! - Love you for your big heart - f.e.f. oxox :) me