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IDEAL COUPLE

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IDEAL COUPLE

I do like her beautiful eyebrow 
But she plucked it and drew something 
I do like her beautiful eyelash and eyelid 
But she painted it with colors 
I do like her reddish lip 
But she always uses lipstick 
I do like the melody 
But she likes rock 
I do like family movies 
But she likes action movies 
I do like watching discovery 
But she likes comedy series 
I am a vegetarian 
But she is a non vegetarian 
I do like cheap outfits 
But she likes costly 
We are acting as an ideal couple.



a simple poem .nothing serious .just time pass .jk

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  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:21:00 PM
    How charming..this is very nice and enchanting indeed jdoll..JL

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 10/21/2012 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you .your doll
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 3:27:00 AM
    Ha ha - - No two people are alike. I've been married 45 years and we are quite different in our tastes. It could be boring if two people were exactly the same.

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 7/11/2012 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you.jk
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 7:34:00 AM
    Well written jk. - when two hearts meet, it may be hot flames........ - Thank you for always come back to read some of mine poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/23/2012 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you dear poetess .jk
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:03:00 AM
    SO CUTE!! Personality matters I guess HAHA. "plucked" and "draw" don't verbally agree. "plucked" is past tense so "drew" would be correct in line 2 and since you two are one group, "AN ideal couple" would be proper in the last line. Poetry is healing and I enjoy reading poets' work and writing as well <3

    Britt Avatar JustcallMe Britt
    Date: 6/22/2012 2:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)
    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/22/2012 2:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you .i have modified this poem as per your suggestions .thank you very much .jk