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Would it ever

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Would it ever

When Lord? 
When can I be everything I am supposed to?
When you will be finished with me?
Is it ever going to end?
When can I call it complete?
When God?
Is it going to happen?
Am I always the working progress?
I want to enjoy the finished product now
God why must I wait God?
You are the greatest one right? 
And you can do all things
Then why must I wait?
I don’t understand it Lord
Why can it happen now? 
God I have waited
God can you say it’s done and it’s done?
When is it ever?
Would it ever?    	

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  1. Date: 6/23/2012 2:14:00 PM
    That`s not all we will get the answer to Toquyen.....LIVE TODAY......IT IS SUNSHINE !!!!! - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox big hug to you from me :)

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 6/23/2012 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes!!! Love ya, Toquyen