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TAMING THE SENSES

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TAMING THE SENSES


 Light dims from fever of day …

      bare as skin of fireflies’ touch

         skating among petals strewn

            from a  breeze that wafts fragrance  of stillness  ~


Gazing at last tints of night
 
   where stroll  of life traverses

      an inner odyssey, hushed…

         until  all creation binds

            oneness of soil’s center, taming senses
                 
         ~

              

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7/7/7/10 (x2) Contest


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  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:22:00 PM

    Nette, Congratulations in Rick's 7/7/7/10 - (x2) contest. :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:58:00 AM

    Beautiful words of light and wisdom penned, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "7/7/7/10-x2"" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:35:00 AM

    congrats Nette luv on a fantastic win for a fabulous entry .. superbly stated.. still felling low.. but trying hard to bounce back to ME again.. thankxx fo4r all your delightful comments.. they help so much..lkuv..

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your smashing win xx

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this lovely Paiku! Very poetic write as well!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:40:00 AM

    Nette congrats on your great win....David

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:54:00 AM

    Wonderful and great write,Nette...Congrats on your superb win...Ride on brother...

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 4:55:00 PM

    love it Nette babe

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 2:01:00 PM

    excellent write, loved it

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:57:00 PM

    ..."This Is Beautiful *.* Every Now & Again I Have Stepped Into A Moment Reflective Of This Beautiful Oneness, My Dear Beautiful & Sooo Much More, Precious Priceless & Amazingly Gifted, Beautifu Nette *.* Catching Prisms Of Lights Tranquillities In Glimpses Of Joy To Stow Away For That Glorious Day *.* When All We See, Believe & Or Find, Is As Your Beauty Has Thus Sooo Perfectly Painted *.* 'We Are But One, Luv,'" Tristen :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 11:28:00 AM

    what a beautiful piece, Nette

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Aare kahan chala gaya?

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 7:10:00 PM

    You worked wonders with Rick's form, Nette. Wish I could have done so well!!!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 7:55:00 AM

    Deep and very artistic write,sweet Nette:-) Sorry for my late response, hope I can catch up with the commenting again during the weekend.Thanks for dropping by my friend,a truly appreciates it! Huggss and care from Arild

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:17:00 PM

    oh my Nette luv this is stunning.. a top notch creation ..best wishes for big winning.. marvelous words .. incredible imagery.. luv it ..

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:12:00 AM

    aww that is a nice poem, I am not good at thats tyle of wriitng but love it, thanks for your kind comments and yes you are an angel for sure we all are in our own ways and wow the day we get wings will be awesome. take care God bless you

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 2:46:00 PM

    This is a really beautiful write my friend, very beautiful! I thoroughly enjoyed this expressive and delightful poem Nette! You have delivered an amazing, impressive creation! I love reading your poetry whenever you post them, they pique my senses, or in this case...tame them!! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:44:00 PM

    Sure Rick will love this winning poem.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Gazing at the last tints of night, the eye of awareness, the appreciation of night and the appreciation of beauty, all wrapped up for us in your gift of verse hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Last two lines are marvelous, loved much, always bl

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:14:00 PM

    Very tranquil words. I shall try and remember during my next garden meditation visit. Peace and blessings to you.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Oooooo! I felt like I was walking in my garden in the wee hours of the morning. Nice job. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:10:00 PM

    A stunning write Nette, lovely imagery.. Wishing you the best for Rick's contest ;) *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:00:00 PM

    A full 7!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:59:00 PM

    WOOOOOHA I LOVE THE IMAGERY!!!!! YOUR A TRUE WORD SMITH!!!!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:58:00 PM

    A stunning poem so divine you have penned here Nette.Love it!!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:57:00 PM

    I love this one Nette...beautiful poem. - Wish you luck in contest and hope you win. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:55:00 PM

    Yeahhhhhhh!!!