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  1. Date: 7/30/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Hi David all your poems are great keep up the writing

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 6:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your 2nd placement in this contest David. I knew this one would be first or really high up there. This is such an awesome write.

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Artfully worded David--a well deserved placement!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 4:57:00 PM
    congrats David on a fine win for this worthy write on a magnificent immortal poet luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 6:42:00 PM
    [Between the dark and the daylight, When the night is beginning to lower, Comes a pause in the day's occupations, That is known as the Children's Hour./ one of my fav's Mom used to resight it to me at bedtime!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 3:00:00 PM
    Congrats, David. Excellent, well deserved win. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. Ralph

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Tribute By Sonnet" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 10:26:00 PM
    congrats on your second place win, you were a writer and a subject for this contest as Owen picked you for his tribute topic, Your entry was stunning !

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Good rhyme, rhythm and flow to this one that honors William Wordsworth...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the congrats on my contest entry...Sara

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:18:00 AM
    Soup Mail

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 6:49:00 PM
    An amazing tribute in Italian sonnet style, my friend. Very well done!!!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 6:19:00 PM
    to write the words, an make em speak, is what me want old mate, methinks, some of the time... great poem mate...

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:43:00 PM
    Oh my David, this poem is exemplary and so very impressive! Straight into favorites. More than a poem, a Masterpiece! Especially the lovely way you ended this. As in Wordsworth's poem "She was a Phantom of Delight" 'A Being breathing thoughtful breath, A Traveler between life and death'. How you capture his essence! I loved it. You are a talent to be reckoned with.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:34:00 AM
    I'm a great fan of the sonnet, and this is delightful and with some easy seamless trochaic substitution so well sewn in too, i particularly liked the 'corners/waters' half rhyme in your peripeteia...makes an excellent development for reading through to the finale...grand stuff...m

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:28:00 PM
    Now I feel like sleeping David. Peace and blessings my friend.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:08:00 PM
    you outdid wordsworth with this masterfully scribed piece, david... well done and winning huggs! :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Hi David I have not read any W.W. but I am sure he would like this tribute as I do, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Aw thought you were writing about me then ha ha nice tribute David xx

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 10:05:00 AM
    Lovely tribute to W.W. , David - Well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 9:15:00 AM
    Lovely rythm , beautiful poem. I like this