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Cardinalis Cardinalis

It was not the robe flowing beanied kind; nor the ball batting St. Louis slugging variety. I saw the shrill- whistling flying mr. proud to be a bird red male looking for a palomino-ed colored female kind of cardinal come a calling not for me, the earth-bound tin-eared feather-free wingless woman martian-looking through a pair of Zeiss.
©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins June 21, 2012

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 3:06:00 PM

    Kathy, I had to laugh with this one... I started it with a laugh and ended with another... and in between was just beautiful... Love, Terry

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 12:57:00 AM

    Hullo, Kathryn: I have been terrible with responding to comments....or even simply leaving comments of any kind. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement on my poems. Btw - you left some good insight and humour on my recent blogs :D -- This is quite the quirky poem(in a good way). I enjoyed your word usage....can't remember the last time I saw the word: palomino, in a poem? I love Cardinals.

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 7:20:00 PM

    Love this. I remember it from PFT. you are simply marvelous! (so hurry and do those haiku, Kathryn!)

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 10:44:00 AM

    PLEASE write some more! I THINK I've reviewed 'em all, though I'm still lookin'!

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:19:00 PM

    I can hear them calling early each morning. They have a distinctive "cheer cheer" sound. Good way to write about our winged friends.

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 11:39:00 AM

    love this wonderful witty piece, Kathy

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 6:07:00 AM

    Marvelous language and imagery! '...robe flowing beanied kind,' I LOVE IT! and as for '...earth-bound, tin-eared,feather-free wingless woman?' WOW! A home run, Kathy!! Love, Keith :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Nicely written Kathryn - sweet and lovely - like it, thank you - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 8:10:00 AM

    Lovely imagery here!! A sense of humor too.. :)