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Lips of fire - The crown of my body

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Lips of fire - The crown of my body

                 A small boy
              stared at my lips
               And ran miles
              screaming loudly
                 to his mom.
              He pointed out,
    ‘Look mom, she has lips of fire!’

                 I then turned.
            The woman laughed
               when she saw
               my red lipstick
                 sizzling hot.
             And that sums me –
         …I'm miss-interpreted...



6/20/2012

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  1. Date: 1/16/2014 5:53:00 PM

    Oh, boy, this certainly went somewhere I didn't expect, well said, good humor with heart, Vicky, enjoyed this poem a lot.

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:28:00 AM

    but never miss-red, warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:21:00 PM

    How cute is this! BG

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 12:33:00 AM

    nice write burning lips Vicky

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 12:53:00 AM

    I am certain that all of the Godesses of the Ages sympathize with this playful expression - Lips of fire can heal or burn - thanks for being true - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 3:34:00 PM

    Lips of fire burn... your poem burns! I like it!! Terry

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Vicky, this is a very nice and sweet win for Nette's contest.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 9:43:00 PM

    Belated congratulations on your awesome 2nd place, Vicky!!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 2:15:00 AM

    Vicky, congrats on your win...excellent..David

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 2:13:00 PM

    REally glad to see this one on the list. BIG congrats for your unique poem's win.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:37:00 AM

    A brilliant write by you Vicky!Congrats on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 3:26:00 AM

    Congratulations, miss-interpreted, on your fiery win!

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 10:27:00 PM

    adorable, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:56:00 PM

    Cute poem Vicky. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this clever write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 2:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on placing in the contest! A light fun read! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in the Nette's contest Vicky. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:52:00 AM

    HOW CUTE. So you were using hot red lipstick even as a child. I am a more demure pink. I just love light rose and pink colors!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 2:18:00 PM

    It's a kiss that does not burn the lips but definitely can start a spark at the hips....All have their own perceptions now don't we? Peace and much love...along with those blessings.