Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

Can't Go OnThis Way

6-20-2012	I can't go on this way
				Just the edge of the beginning,I began to see,
				What was being said,was not what we had,
				Like a blue nose on a red faced clown,it's not the same,
				No matter how hard you try to explain,
				Kinda hard to be free when inside a cage,to keep in mind,
				I hardly knew you, your actions ruled over me,
				Until I broke away,now I live in the moon.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:58:00 AM

    run or should I say fly to the moon Ricky,get away,that relationship sounds like a one way ticket,lol,great write

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 2:34:00 PM

    Very strong person that was bound..Reminds me of Jackie Gleason's saying to Alice about he was going to send her to the moon..Sara

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Yippie ....if thas how you spell it anyway...cause brotha...you on yo way. Peace and blessing my friend..

    Brown Avatar Ricky Brown Date: 6/20/2012 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Man.