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Wounds So Deep

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Wounds So Deep

The pain doesn't cease
The blood won't stop pouring
In my palm, a permanent crease
From the blade that I carry

I don't trust myself
Neither should you
I'll turn my back
I'll turn away from you

No bandage can cover
No pill can hold
You'd like to be my lover
But I don't think you can handle

You want me to share
My entire life story
But there should be a rating
Because it's kind of gory 

I'll try to open my heart
But I can't make any promises
This time I'll be smart
Because my wounds are so deep

*Written on June 19, 2012*

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  1. Date: 7/6/2012 9:41:00 AM

    I will be with you until they heal,gently nursing your wounds,your pain I feel,great write Lily

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 10:42:00 AM

    Lily, when the cut hurts a visit to the right court may make it cute without a hoot. Luv this piece.

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 10:40:00 AM

    Lily, cut really hurt but a visit to the right court may make it cute without a hoot. Luv this piece.

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 3:16:00 PM

    "Awesome write here....Lily!!! (sweet+sour=Carma ) 8)"

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 2:41:00 PM

    great write Lily

    Mayfield Avatar Lily Mayfield Date: 6/23/2012 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mr. Palmer -Lily <3
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:22:00 PM

    We all have a choice to me...and you reap what you sow....May he have mercy....and bless you. I pray you find peace.

    Mayfield Avatar Lily Mayfield Date: 6/23/2012 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's just a poem.