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GOOD NIGHT

She said a good night 
And cut off the phone 
How this night is a good 
It is a horrible one

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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:27:00 PM

    awww J..this is sad but so bold of heart..Juniper

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 7:02:00 AM

    you are an angel, God bless from diane

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/21/2012 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:10:00 PM

    Only if you allow it to be....it took a while for me to final see it. I pray you find it sooner than I... Peace and blessings to you.

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/20/2012 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:23:00 AM

    It's tough. I hope you love yourself. Having someone else love you gives you all the more reason to live, sure, I DEFINITELY understand but you're here now! Writing is perfectly healthy in healing. Try not to live a fantasy. Living isn't as easy as telling yourself there will be better days because that is NEVER certain! Hope CAN be your enemy <3

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/20/2012 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:10:00 AM

    Sweet poem...there is a new day tomorrow. - oxox Anne-Lise

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/20/2012 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:57:00 AM

    It sounds like it nothing worse than being cut off, enjoyed Jay, have a good one vie

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/20/2012 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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