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The 'Brand 'ed Lady

The all grace-n-finesse, prim-n-propah lady, Alighting from a chauffeur driven AUDI, Just look at her glistening high-heeled shoes They're a pair of enviable JIMMY CHOOs, She's spent an awful lot of time on her face Putting her MAC make-up perfectly in place! To make up for her hands' skin that sags She owns a collection of LOUIS VUITTON handbags, She has a grooming sense that would impress Dolled up in a fitting VERSACE dress, Her manicured-nail hands with polish to match Adorning her wrist, a limited-edition OMEGA watch, Her eyes are drawing curious stares, For they are well-hidden behind ARMANI glares, Her diamond studs and rings glitter and shine She's chosen some SWAROVSKI pieces cut fine. She cuts a spectacular figure for the eyes, Her chiffon GUCCI scarf too looks nice The mention of some brands will make her go scarlet She won't divulge about her VICTORIA'S SECRET!! However, looking at her face pale and sallow I seriously doubt that, inside, she is quite hollow!

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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 6:38:00 PM

    Yesha, a wonderful poem. Congrats. Nameste. Rick

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:44:00 PM

    Yesha, your poem is lovely... congratulations with your winning poem~ always* PD

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 12:06:00 PM

    LOL--So, so true Yesha--Congrats!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:12:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:17:00 PM

    YESHA, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 10:18:00 PM

    congrats Yesha on an excellent write and win luv ..

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 4:09:00 PM

    What a picture you painted [I seriously doubt that inside there is anything, she's hollow!] Congrad's on your win. Light & love

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:11:00 PM

    Yesha,,, hi once again,,,, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:15:00 AM

    very nice Yesha...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:31:00 AM

    i just read aloud to my son..and he was wow!.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:29:00 AM

    Yesha,i love this poem that you have written,its so intelligent and wonderful...sometimes you really amaze me and i think you are too good to be true..the way you write,nobody has impressed me so much as you have,truly,hats off to you,every poem is a winner ,and i congratulate you on this win,this should be on top in the first place.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:07:00 PM

    Nicely done Yesha. It must take her hours to get ready. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:30:00 AM

    wow Yesha,how did i miss this,you wrote a very entertaining piece,yes i find quite a lot of peopel like that where I now live,can connect with this one,thanks for this very enjoyable write..

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Very creative write, thoroughly enjoyed!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:30:00 PM

    wow, you made QUITE a statement with this one. You are sure GOOD, Yesha!! Geez, MY brand name is "WAlmart" or thrift shop buys! (you can find really cute things for cheap. I will never understand the need to buy brand names) Love this!

    Shah Avatar Yesha Shah Date: 6/21/2012 11:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Agreed Andrea, one can get cute things at such stores.
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Loving this all the way..a creative write!!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 7:05:00 AM

    Very interesting...got to know a lot of brand names..and the wonderful ending :) Jag

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:54:00 AM

    Excellent write.Her description and the twist at the last line...just wonderful.Enjoyed very much.