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On my seventh glass

I was on my seventh glass 
of wine and I said to my self.....


A person that seeks only to 
make them self understood, 
but does not attempt  
to understand another,

has a mind that is rotten. 
It has spoiled because of 
its selfishness and pride. 
Thus they will never see
 the world for what it truly is.

There imagination is black and white. 
They are blinded even in the day.

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  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:26:00 PM

    I totally understand this! Nice write...

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:31:00 PM

    "Yes, Indeeded Black N' White... BLINDED at the bottom In selfishness... SUPERB GENDOR HERE ELLIOT!!! Xoxo Carma*SWEETHEART"

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 11:03:00 AM

    yes, they are blinded even in the day. Excellent poem, Elliott. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 11:02:00 AM

    message at the bottom of a bottle Im wit it

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 10:47:00 AM

    I pray they find the light. Peace and blessing to you my friend.