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The wet bedroom day 2 ENTER AT YOUR OWN RISK

What if I treated every portion of your anatomy
Individually
To a little sexual creativity
Partially under the influence of the smell of you and me
And the softness of your feet
And the feeling that at this moment
Im focused
On paying attention to nothing but the dimensions
Of your perfection crafted inventions
I cleverly send a tingle through your waist
As I taste
That ticklish place
And I face
The option of causin high elation with my temptation
Or mental gravitation with the words I'm sayin 
I opt for the best of both worlds
As I unfurl
My master plan for bodily gratification beyond sexual relations
Something to the effect of massaging your creations with passion and patience

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  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:23:00 AM

    Hi! the only thing I see that is wrong here is your spelling of the word, waist. Which should be spelled with an 'i', as it is, waste is in reference to garbage. so you might want to make that correction. Other than that it is a lovely and sensuous poem. hugs, Catie :)

    Jefferson Avatar Sha'ntez Jefferson Date: 6/19/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks catie fixed it much appreciated
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:11:00 AM

    : ) reminds me of that group called ,wet ,wet, wet, wonderful gift you have with your words. love Elizabeth