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OPPOSITE RHYTHM

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OPPOSITE RHYTHM

Sleeping during the day,
staying awake at night;
opposite rhythm does harm, 
I gulp down strong coffee...
my body shakes like leaves
blown by a chilly breeze.


I don't wonder where
the spotty moon went;
I ponder on words:
leaking fate to loss... 
loneliness to cost. 
 

Owls look too sad
without moon rays;
they have no friend...
would that be me?


They know that
opposite
rhythm does harm.


They feel
fear, then


flee.
 


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  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:55:00 PM
    the night becomes you, andrew.. congrats!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Andrew....a late night owl sort of write....Interesting poem written by a guy whose circadian rhythm is probably altered like mine....NIght shift will do that to ya over time...Congrats. So pleased I got to read your work. :)

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Andrew. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Andrew xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:31:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:39:00 AM
    ANDREW~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:39:00 AM
    CONGRATS! nice poem! Good images.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Andrew hope the owls cheer up now, thanks for entering and well done..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Andrew. Congrats to you with your win. I love the part about owls. I think you had some syllable counts wrong. Otherwise, I bet this would have been in the list of ten!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:58:00 AM
    very nice DH, Andrew. best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 3:02:00 AM
    Good one.Its happens sometimes but never fear.Good luck