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Black Hole

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Black Hole

In this black hole I fall deeper and deeper
throw me back i'm no keeper

I'm down so deep
No one can even hear me weep

Down here dreaming
of that light to start gleaming

How did I get here 
my mind is not clear

I must get out of this black hole
and never fall again

This battle I must win

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  1. Date: 6/25/2012 10:17:00 AM
    good poem! keep strong. you can do anything through christ who stregthens you. keep writing, its a good way to vent rejoice and praise!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Terrible terrible place to be. Feelings of deserved worthlessness leave a sticky residue whether even when we overcome the battle... great way of putting this feeling, dear Brittney <3

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 5:57:00 AM
    This is lovely. Weldone ^.^