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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 6:31:00 PM
    CHA CHING!!!!! this is the one that i would marry today if it but proposed. Masterpiece, you know how we do it. high fives, lisa. this one does it for me. T. S.

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 5:06:00 PM
    Love it from beginning to end!! The flow is marvelous!!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 1:23:00 PM
    What an incredible display of emotion! Beginning and ending with the same phrase is very effective, and your vivid imagery and phrasing are so powerful! Well done, Lisa!! Best wishes, Keith :)