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THE LAKE OF TEARS

 A Lake of tears I am 
Many lily blossoms 
 everyday here and 
I await the presence 
Of someone always
Just to watch it al least
Though it is a vain hope 
still I continue .

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:25:00 AM

    I dont think this is a vain hope..I feel it is quite admirable..I will out this on my favorites..Juniper

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 10/16/2012 3:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear jk your doll
    Lock Avatar Juniper Lock Date: 10/16/2012 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *put
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Sorrowful moments....but nerver give up. - Lovely written jk. - like it a lot. - Have a nice Sunday. - Thank you for visit and comments mine poems.- oxox love Anne-Lise

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/17/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks .jk
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 8:23:00 AM

    Touching write.Very nice!

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/17/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks dear poet .jk
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 7:34:00 AM

    Love this piece here...so heartfelt!!! very strong lines here to me.

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/17/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks .jk