Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 12:54:00 PM
    Very well done and thought provoking too, I like that.

  1. Date: 5/23/2014 8:20:00 PM
    A very prophetic write Susan, i hope people are listening, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 3:21:00 PM
    Susan,great choice of words and thoughts. I especially enjoy the ending . Thanks for commenting on my poem. I wonder how long He' ll let us fight his war? crossfox!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 11:14:00 AM
    Much truth in this. I loved it!-Patrick Farley IV

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 11:46:00 PM
    Great message, Susan! Someday all our weapons and petty wars will come to a complete halt... as God steps up to the table (as if he wasn't already there all along)...

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:27:00 AM
    Wishing for the day when all nations ,people will live in harmony Susan. Impressive Haiku. Anne

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 3:34:00 AM
    Susan, your poem rhymes well. The problem of salvation is that it is the self-righteous (aren't we all like this at times?) who think only they will be favoured by God! Susan, thanks for kind your comment on my haiku (26/4/13). Keep on writing! Peter 27/4/13

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:02:00 PM
    Great work

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Nice write.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:41:00 PM this one Susan, ~ always & forever ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Pray for His peace to extend to all. Thanks for your kind comments on my peoms.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 4:50:00 AM
    I like this one!

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Got that one correct..Someday He is going to rule and reign with His brothers and sisters..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 4:44:00 AM
    Can hardly wait for the day...Tired of the fight...they took my son without a chance...Life is not a nice place...Faith is null...The powers of hell are prevailing now...Thanks for your comments..Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 11:49:00 AM
    It's fought within each human soul. Upon our faces, we see the toll. The war within till death we part. So keep it tender, your precious heart. Wonderful poem Susan. Merry Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 10:16:00 AM
    Very sobering message. In Revelations we are commanded to warn others of this coming day. I joyfully accept this most important of messages. Very eloquently expressed. The powers of hell can't prevail. Every Knee will Bow, every mouth will confess.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:38:00 AM
    Great haiku Susan, I enjoy the story :D and thank you for your greeting before in my page :D it is really uplifting :D- hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 2:39:00 AM
    Nice haiku series, and congratuations on the win. I have not read you lately, was a very good read early this morning. Cindy

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:53:00 AM
    All four verses remind me of passages in the New Testament Book of Revelation. Each one is decently written.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:25:00 PM
    yes,yes,yes,I see it too,great write Susan