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God's War

Evil all around
Wicked encircle the good
God sends his angels

Prince of peace arrives
Fiery flames from heaven
All armies destroyed

Tanks guns and missiles
Broken to bits and pieces
Strewn about the earth

Human rule ended
Kingdom of heaven prevails
Righteous ones remain.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Wishing for the day when all nations ,people will live in harmony Susan. Impressive Haiku. Anne

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 3:34:00 AM

    Susan, your poem rhymes well. The problem of salvation is that it is the self-righteous (aren't we all like this at times?) who think only they will be favoured by God! Susan, thanks for kind your comment on my haiku (26/4/13). Keep on writing! Peter 27/4/13

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:02:00 PM

    Great work

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Nice write.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:30:00 AM

    Loved this one!! great read!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:41:00 PM

    wow..wow wowo....wow..love this one Susan, ~ always & forever ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:13:00 PM

    Pray for His peace to extend to all. Thanks for your kind comments on my peoms.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 4:50:00 AM

    I like this one!

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Got that one correct..Someday He is going to rule and reign with His brothers and sisters..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 4:44:00 AM

    Can hardly wait for the day...Tired of the fight...they took my son without a chance...Life is not a nice place...Faith is null...The powers of hell are prevailing now...Thanks for your comments..Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 11:49:00 AM

    It's fought within each human soul. Upon our faces, we see the toll. The war within till death we part. So keep it tender, your precious heart. Wonderful poem Susan. Merry Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Very sobering message. In Revelations we are commanded to warn others of this coming day. I joyfully accept this most important of messages. Very eloquently expressed. The powers of hell can't prevail. Every Knee will Bow, every mouth will confess.

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 7:56:00 PM

    The images of truth are brilliantly displayed in order of our peril, or life with the Lord. BEAUTIFUL!

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:38:00 AM

    Great haiku Susan, I enjoy the story :D and thank you for your greeting before in my page :D it is really uplifting :D- hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 2:39:00 AM

    Nice haiku series, and congratuations on the win. I have not read you lately, was a very good read early this morning. Cindy

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:53:00 AM

    All four verses remind me of passages in the New Testament Book of Revelation. Each one is decently written.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:25:00 PM

    yes,yes,yes,I see it too,great write Susan

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:09:00 AM

    love these Susan, glad i found them.

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 12:26:00 PM

    It is a pleasure to read your poems again, Susan...this is a vivid description of what is to come. Great haiku series and congratulations on your win - Tim

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 11:14:00 AM

    Susan, this is not only vivid in words but also in thought. great descriptive form of poetic insight my friend.

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 1:20:00 AM

    Hi, Susan!! 3 poems in the last 2 years? Well...you're not a prolific writer! LOL!! Where have you been? I was missing you! I love this haiku-sequence! ....See you the next year! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:25:00 AM

    Very well written Susan, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 11:39:00 AM

    your mind is blessed,great write Susan,check out my love vs hate

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:55:00 PM

    congrats on your top win, susan!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:44:00 AM

    A wonderful write Susan, congratulations on you 1st place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 1:11:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Armageddon" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Congrats! Love how it ends!! Tanya

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:04:00 AM

    Congrts on your big win...straight to the point. BG

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:00:00 AM

    "Kingdom of heaven prevails" Amen to that! Congrats on your 1st place win, Susan! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 8:36:00 PM

    Congrats on your 1st place win Susan hugs vie

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