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Blissful noise

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Blissful noise

If love be the manure
That means I am the plant
Readying to submerge
into your shelter sweet
In perfect harmony
with my youthful yearnings.

If roses were hands
Then I’d be the bee
Hoping to stand on
nectary flowers
Wishing for closure.

If jail means you
I’d lose the key
And stick by you
Till forever

Sweet nothings
Until dusk



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  1. Date: 2/21/2013 4:53:00 PM

    I found one I missed, I'm glad I went looking. I enjoyed re-reading some of the others.

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 2:31:00 AM

    Lovely words

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 12:01:00 PM

    I love your choice of words in this poem. Great!! Tonya

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Vicky. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Vicky xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:36:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Vicky~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Nice work...creative thought..CONGRATS!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Vicky, a very romantic write, thanks for entering and well done...David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:00:00 AM

    wow,, this is really nice, Vicky. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:37:00 AM

    You do it so well, thank you for sharing your poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 5:08:00 PM

    Very descriptive and expressive work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 12:22:00 PM

    very touching!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 3:21:00 AM

    Wonderful Hexaverse.Love it!