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Crush

Oh sweet 'motion swirling deep In lusty loving tugging ways, I pray this dream of mine will keep And bring me more in future days; Words a sweet and lovely sound, Spilling out my hearts content; Should I fall and fall forever, ~ For it be my souls intent.

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Taking simple ideas and expounding on them is a talent. Very nice write. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:50:00 PM

    This is very passionate and well written - JH

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:52:00 PM

    Very nice,Dana'lynn....Nice to see you again... :o)

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:58:00 PM

    WOW STUPENDOUS WRITE.VERY ENCHANTING!!!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:42:00 PM

    This is a fabulous write Dana'lynn! I thoroughly enjoyed the contemplative descriptions you gave of emotions flowing! I truly enjoy the love you have displayed within this write! I believe I have it with my true love, my wife! Thank you for sharing this elaborate poem with us all! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:38:00 PM

    yes, the rush we get... the crush brings us hope, dreams:)), a lovely write Dana'lynn, enjoyed your poem, always, ~p.d.~

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:25:00 PM

    This is why I love crushes so much...energizing and dreamy! BEautiful rhyme! Gwendolen