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Below is the poem entitled BLEEDING SKIES which was written by poet RONNY MADONSELA. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Flaming shperiods descend
As the clouds swirl frenziedly
Uprooting erections

The seas withdraw then rise
To swallow the earth
As death enters

The grounds depart
To sail the seas
As ember paints the skies

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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 6:48:00 PM
    the title also caught my eye...loved the images in this....great poem :)

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 11:53:00 PM
    your powerful images take me to this futuristic scene, ronny.. best wishes in the contest and huggs!.. a gem!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 1:59:00 PM
    I was intrigued by the title, then realized it was for the contest. Should do well, nice series of haiku.

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 8:09:00 AM
    Marvelous! End of the world is truly depicted! Best of luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 5:49:00 AM
    Scary! Great take on Armageddom, Ronny! My best wishes in Gayle's Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:35:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest..intense write!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:37:00 PM
    Nice write on this series of haiku. Good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl

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  1. Date: 6/16/2012 4:14:00 PM
    Very descriptive work..Good luck in the contest..Winners' list for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 1:40:00 PM
    ..."I Diggg The Third Line ... Sooo Much For The Goregasms, Hahahaha ... 'Paint The Skies Sweeet Ronnie *.* In The Colours Of Your Love, Luv,'" Tristen :)

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:55:00 AM
    very nice haiku, Ronnie, there are a few spelling errors, like... shouldn't it be "asteroids and frenziedly, and death." those are the only ones I seen. hugs, Catie :)

    Date: 6/16/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx catie. I didnt mean asteriods , bt spheriods. I had a typo on the death. I spell checked the frendziedly on the my dictionery when composing. Am confused now lol. Thanx though.
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:33:00 AM
    I loved the flow. Well written my friend!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Beautiful words...Many blessing ...Peace be to you are your family my friend.

    Date: 6/16/2012 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx man.