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your smile

In my mind's eye,I see your face that is etched so vividly in my heart filling me up with a yearning to belong to you for eternity. Even with eyes closed, even in slumber, subconsciously my innermost thoughts are only about you. Unknowingly, you enchanted, and enraptured me with your charm. I am drawn towards you enamored by that smile of yours.

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  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:16:00 PM

    YASMIN, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:48:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Yasmin! I'm a sucker for a smile of sincerity, one that lights up the face and eyes. Nothing better than a loving smile! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 10:14:00 PM

    congrats yasmin on a fabulous write and super win for this smile luv ..

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 4:05:00 PM

    Me too a sucker for a good smile! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Yassie

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:08:00 PM

    Yasmin, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on a great win Yas! loved it.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 7:57:00 PM

    Very romantic writing. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 5:23:00 PM

    Yasmin, too Beautifully written....

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 1:41:00 AM

    You deserve top honors with this beauty Yasmin. Excellent writing!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:27:00 PM

    " in my minmd's eye..".. mareey, you take me to your world!... congrats all the way!.. toppers!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 5:02:00 PM

    Awesome and excellent piece,Yasmin..Great job..Congratulations on your super win...

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 1:59:00 PM

    well done yasmin ,high 5 to you ,my friend

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Yasmin xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 4:18:00 PM

    This is beautiful, Yasmin...congrats!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:46:00 PM

    He must be melting as he reads this Yasmin, you are wading in the waters of romance my girl, and I am smiling for you, hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:43:00 AM

    Yasminovah!...A standing and a sitting OVATION for this soft romantic smiling dimini hexi...Now that I know it's ROMANCE that David wants, I will not be writing of bibs, high chairs, and toddler ware any more!.....hee hee...This entry is so nice...Your hard work benefited you! Love, Gwendolen

    R. Avatar Gwendolen R. Date: 6/22/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    or SLOBBER! hahaha.
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:02:00 AM

    :-),, did you say SMILE Yasmin~xox~ a wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day (: PD

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:53:00 AM

    I am lost in this lovely write! Congrats on your first place win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 9:52:00 AM

    A wonderful write, Yasmin! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 9:18:00 AM

    Look at you go! What a wonderful write. Congrad's and Always Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 9:12:00 AM

    Oh wow this is red hot...no wonder it ended up at the top...Lovely Yasmin, many congrats!!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:45:00 AM

    WOWIE, I had no idea you had posted this one. How wonderful you must feel to get number one, sweet poet. You really captured DAvid's heart using romance in your poetry!! Congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Congrats Yasmin on your win!!!! Hugs!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:07:00 AM

    Wow, Yasmin, so vey well done. Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:00:00 AM

    Congrats on this top win, Yasminovna..i am enamoured by the charm of this poem..:) Jag

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:54:00 AM

    Yas, congratulations on your outstanding win, it was so romantic, and you know I am a romantic at heart, it was a clear winner for me, well done, have a lovely weekend....David

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 12:48:00 PM

    Check your email....

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