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  1. Date: 8/23/2012 7:09:00 PM

    David, if you are reading your comments one more time... i want you to know...i posted a poem for you, inspired by this poem.... xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Bravo... Congrats on this great win.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:24:00 PM

    A late congrats *luv* Skat

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 9:19:00 PM

    Hi David,, I remember this one... Congratulations , with your straight forward poem.. have yourself a good night~XOX~TEX

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 8:29:00 PM

    Truely outstanding, well deserved win, David. Heartiest Congrats, my friend. Great job, nice going. Kudos. Ralph

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 11:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Give It Straight" contest David. Love, Carol

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:29:00 PM

    Congratulations your BIG win...

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 10:19:00 AM

    LOL...I like it!!! Big Congrats on your win David...well done, love ya, Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 12:33:00 PM

    congrates on your win jane xoxo

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 10:58:00 AM

    Oh hell yeah...this is very cool the last line...many congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 8:47:00 AM

    Congratulations on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 7:50:00 AM

    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Wow, David!...strong poem for sure...Great win!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 7:22:00 AM


  1. Date: 7/25/2012 6:01:00 AM

    I won't lump it 'cause I LIKE it, David!... Well deserved first place win...congratulations to you! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 2:08:00 AM

    Great poem... very direct... Congratulations on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 4:17:00 AM

    You speak for us both here Bro....excellent!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 3:30:00 AM have soup mail

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:15:00 AM

    You are you .....There is only one of you and one of me...... :) - well done David. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 3:00:00 AM

    What a very empowered poem this is, David! I like the conviction you put in here!And I sure do hope that I can say it with conviction as you do... especially that line about procrastination, eep, I think I have taken that to an art form. I need help! Btw I love how you ended this! I for one Like it! And ok, I am a bit dense-- what does "TBC" mean-- would that be to be continued?

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:55:00 PM

    brilliant is the one word comes to mind after reading this David.. great expression in each line.. I am impressed at who u are luv.. we are at beach for Summer fun now.. great to read this beauty..

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:18:00 PM

    I'm gonna stir the soup now.. Cause I don't like lumps in mine.. and I have one thing to say about you...WEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee EEEEEEEE! I feel as if you are Zeus, holding a lightning bolt, ready to strike all who try to pull you down from the beautiful cloud you floated on. I love your second and fourth, and fifth and sixth line... very powerful. and second to last... good luck in the contest.. ..xox~pd

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 12:10:00 PM

    love it - especially the last line, David. Congrats on all your wins : ) I enjoyed the profanity blog - I'm not for it or against it - but was rather surprised to see our poet laureatte used the f word several times in a small volume I recently bought.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:27:00 AM

    Love it David!Very nice!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:32:00 AM

    I don't have words..just tears...Peace and blessing!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:16:00 AM

    I liked it thumbs up David,you are the one....