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Net

 It came to me seeing
How I enjoy poetry
Why not just type poetry
In the search engine box
Click, see what I might find
I'm here three years later

Interwoven wires
All around the world
Different people
Countries, languages
Customs, religions

I stood on net
The net covered
Feet, legs, waist then
Entered my heart

Became part 
Of life, holds
Attention

Addict
Trapped in

Net 

Poetry pronounced poe/try

Sponsor: David Williams
Contest: True Diminishing Hexaverse

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  1. Date: 6/17/2012 9:59:00 AM

    Wow Sara. One word brings us to such places. And we are all alike. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 12:20:00 AM

    wow, what a most interesting way you chose to do the contest. Very clever. Aren't you GLAD you stood on the net!!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Sara, enjoyed...good luck in the contest..xox~pd

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 4:49:00 PM

    So that's where your love for poetry began! Yeah, I am an addict too, Sara! This was a fun write for you I bet! Have a great weekend. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 4:07:00 PM

    A nicely way of putting it Sara, well done! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 12:27:00 PM

    yes, I'm an addict too, my friend, lol. Lovely write. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 12:25:00 PM

    I really enjoyed the way you went about writing for this contest Sara! This is a fabulous, simply grandiose write my friend! Awesome! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:15:00 AM

    An excellent approach to do the contest Sara.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 10:50:00 AM

    truly amaizing, sara. And all the best for dave's contest.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:38:00 AM

    Nicely done, loved it and always bl

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 7:39:00 AM

    ..."Tis Exactly, How As One Would Feel About Your Beauties Own Beautiful Treasures, Deeper Into The Beautiful Net; Cast Amid Your Splendours, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful, Priceless & Preciously Beautiful, 'Beautiful Sara' * I Say This In Absolute Truth, For, I Have Come To Love Your Poetry *.* As 'I Have Come To Love You ... Luv,'" Tristen :)

     Avatar Date: 6/16/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ..."Am I Not Telling Your Beauty The Truth Baby; 'This You Know!'" *
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:18:00 AM

    great write Sara,go get em in the contest,lol