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MY EYES

Emission
of light rays from
the core of
my being,shows true
traits,treasures,
fear;lust and love
staring at nature`s good works.

Without them
I can`t behold,
pretty legs,
pleasant faces
and attacks
by wicked ones,
which have made me myopic.

CONTEST:"Special crown of my body-A whitney" sponsored by Nette Onclaud.
6-16-2012.

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  1. Date: 7/8/2012 8:35:00 PM

    Olusegun, this is a very nice and sweet win for Nette's contest.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 10:01:00 PM

    Olusegun, belated congratulations on your deserved win!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 6:43:00 PM

    Olusegun, congrats on your super win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 2:22:00 AM

    Olusegun congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 2:19:00 PM

    Wonderful job with your poem. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 1:25:00 PM

    protection and pleasure...mmmh...both worthwhile functions no doubt. Congrats on your win Arowolo!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Beautiful poem Olusegun!Congrats on your win!!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 3:56:00 AM

    Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 10:39:00 PM

    myopic huh? , congrats on your win with this great entry

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:10:00 PM

    You are right. Eyes are the windows of the soul they say and should top out as crowning jewel. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in the Nette's "Crown" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:11:00 AM

    well done. I like how you did your entry!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:54:00 PM

    Eyes, the windows to the soul, I wish you well in the contest with this exprressive poetry my friend. :)

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 4:34:00 PM

    I like your verse..xox~pd

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 7:46:00 PM

    This should make EVERYONE appreciate their eyes! Good luck in the contest, Olusequn <3