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BROKEN SLEEP

Broken sleep
With colorful dreams
More cautious 
Spends more time 
With a mirror and comb 
What happens
Am I falling in love ?

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  1. Date: 6/19/2012 9:37:00 AM

    This almost sounds like a haiku, short and to the point. Look forward to reading more of your work.

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/19/2012 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks .jk
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:00:00 AM

    Amazing. Well Said. Tfs

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/16/2012 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk