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night music

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                       the evening stars

                             that prick the darkening

                                 aftermath of sun...

                                    will sing once more,

                                        in ancient tongues,
                                
                                            quixotic songs

                                                 as if they've not 
                                                    
                                                          been heard before

                                                


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  1. Date: 7/20/2012 5:01:00 PM

    speechless

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:08:00 AM

    Mozart could not have written this any better. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 2:21:00 AM

    So happy to see this wonderful dessert at the top of the winners list. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 12:01:00 PM

    A belated congrats on your win, Carrie! Your poem is lovely, and I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:46:00 AM

    Lovely done and congrats on your win. Loved always bl

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:55:00 PM

    "As if they've not been heard before" Whew! Carrie. As one viewer correctly noted, so much said in just a few lines. Elegant...Tim

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 4:49:00 AM

    Congratulations Carrie on your top win with this wonderful poem!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 7:25:00 PM

    Wonderful. Like music to my ears, sweet poet. And congrats on this well deserved win.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 5:58:00 PM

    supr congrats on first place Carrie.. luv..

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 2:44:00 PM

    sometimes less is more and I love the way you wrote with elegance here, congrats on your 1st place win Carrie hope all is well with you, hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 2:14:00 PM

    yeah! we are twins!! HIGH FIVE! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Carr ,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 9:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your beautiful poem winning the contest.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 2:39:00 AM

    Beautifuly imagers... wonderful poem... Congratulations on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 9:59:00 PM

    Dazzling write! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this descriptive and expressive work..Those stars have their own language...Sara

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 3:23:00 PM

    I love this! Going to my favs....Tanya

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 3:18:00 PM

    Enjoyed your verse on songs and stars Carrie, steps to heavenly songs are always beautiful day or night, hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 12:55:00 PM

    Amazing poetry from you Carrie!A fav!!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 12:15:00 PM

    LOVE THE IMAGERY HERE!!! Beautifully written!!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Ahhhh, lovely Carrie. Whenever I see your name I know I am about to enjoy myself with words that express the beauty of life, words that I will remember at idol moments when I feel like having dessert.

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:45:00 AM

    This is a beauty Carrie, embracing this moment, while reading your gem.. Enjoy the weekend ahead ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:26:00 AM

    I love that night music Carrie it is just beautiful !!!! Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:17:00 AM

    This is a beautiful write, I love the stars! Great Work!!