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Her

Yessss,
her touch
did move mine likes

Her eyes,
entered mine depths

Her lips,
caressed mine flesh

Her promise;
filled
the all of me


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  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:28:00 AM

    Lovely poem!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:16:00 PM

    yes you have been captured,lol,great write James

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 1:15:00 PM

    ahhhhh! So romantic, James! Im going to fav this beauty! Excellent! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:46:00 PM

    This is so nice. Very romantic, James!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:54:00 PM

    I can certainly say you are receptive James, if that's the right word! I sense a steely resolve to mesmerize the captive here; probably a willing one too. As always, I don't think anyone can read your poetry without that rush of adrenalin!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 4:38:00 PM

    So romantic...Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 2:08:00 PM

    beauty and grace fill these lines James luv.. a treasure to read and cherish for lovers and others.. very intense with passions flow .. hope u and Noah are well .. we are at beach for Summer luv..

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:57:00 AM

    ahh, trust James to come up with an awesome piece like this.. I just love the ending too ;) enjoy the weekend, love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 10:49:00 AM

    enchanting, james.. like " the all of me.."..:) charmed!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 9:26:00 AM

    James, lovely and sweet love poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 9:26:00 AM

    Nice to read your poems again, enjoyed have a blessed day hugs vie