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THE TOY

The crying kid repeats 
The demand to his papa 
He wants a toy 
‘’A gun and knife’’ 
A Hollywood movie is 
Still progressing at the TV. 

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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:11:00 PM

    I love the honesty of your pen..JL

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:02:00 AM

    Yes, its true, kids pick from TV. Well said. tfs

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/16/2012 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 9:51:00 AM

    thank you .jk

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 9:39:00 AM

    Yes, children take lessons from what they see on TV. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem to day. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise