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I LOST MY TRUST

I lost my trust and belief 
In this merciless world 
That even wounds the shadow 
And sucks the blood emitting 
I lost my trust and belief 
In God 
As he is crucifying at every second 
And lost all his power 
But I trust in me and I will fight 
As life is to live and not to weep 

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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:09:00 PM

    this one touches my heart J..Jl

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 10/17/2012 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear.jk
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 9:08:00 AM

    wow I really feel this one.....sigh thank you for sharing

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/18/2012 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks. jk
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:58:00 PM

    Jay, very deep...xox~pd

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/18/2012 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks .jk
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 7:39:00 AM

    This is definitely the conclusion LOTS and LOTS of people have come to. Stay strong, keep writing and NEVER hold back in your poetry <3

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/14/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your kind words .jk