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Lonely Moon

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Lonely Moon

Lay down upon this green bed 
Gaze upon the brilliant orb 
Rest your head 
Free your soul to loneliness 
  
As it ponders down at you 
The guiding, shimmering beam 
Shepherd to those who travel 
In the loneliness of its hours 
  
In the blanket of abyss 
There it radiates 
The pure allure 
Of its loneliness 
  
The stars that accompany it 
Glimmer as its tears 
Testament of the sorrow 
The oppressed burden of loneliness 
  
Grant me privilege to gaze 
To rejoice in your radiance 
To share the dark blanket above 
Entwine in your loneliness 
My dear lonely moon

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 12:23:00 AM
    This poem will bring the readers to a new imaginary world .so profound each of its line .i like '' IN the blanket of abyss'',''Glimmer as its tears'',very much .what an imagination .indeed it is a great poem .thank you for sharing .jk .i give 7 as my rating .