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WORLD CALLS ME AS GRASS

Perhaps  I am only a grass
Living on the top of this hill
Trees here may think
They are taller than me
Million , trillion and zillion 
But they are beneath me
As they cannot survive on the top
Don’t have me any fear on hurricanes
Heavy rains or floods 
I am always safe here.
Indeed I am the first one here
Blessed with the first ray of sun
And it is me the first get a feeling
Of a feather touch as soon as Moon
Appears and I am always happy
As getting the kisses of Breez continually 
Decorated with golden pearls at morning 
And brighten with a silver crown at night 
I am living here as a queen 
But the world always calls me as a grass 




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  1. Date: 6/13/2012 3:03:00 AM

    yor poem has been woven intricately.Very beautiful and thanks for yor comments.

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/13/2012 3:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your kind words.jk
  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:23:00 AM

    This poem portrays the realistic outlook of those who are content with their position in life knowing who they are and what positive benefits they reap. I hope this is a poem that inspires all to go for what they know and not only what they see. Appreciate what you have and live comfortably <3

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/13/2012 3:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your kind words .jk
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:50:00 AM

    Thnks Jayachandran for your kind comments. Your lines tho simple have got a deep quality about them. Keep on writing. All the best :) Jag

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/12/2012 11:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear poet ,i think you are a malayali .priya kavi thangalude kavithakal enikku valare eshtappettu .ente e kavitha ennu parayavunna srrishty vayikkuvan angayepolulla valare bhahumanyanaya oru kavi kanicha mahamanaskathaykku valare nandhi.njan evide varunna oro divasavum angayude oru kavitha yenkilum vayikkukayum ente abhiprayam rekappeduthukayum cheyyum .subha rathry.jk