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POP

He fills me 
Like a supermarket
Bubble gum dispenser
With black eyes
Of condescension
Give me a dime
Eye will give you

A glance 

That will POP
Your bubble


6/12/12

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:33:00 AM

    goes the weasel ..pd

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 5:48:00 AM

    odd, I like that she only gives a glance, like he's relly not worth looking at, interesting.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:20:00 AM

    Susan for all those full of themselves baboons. Perfect. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:10:00 AM

    Susan congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Susan, thank you for supporting my contest!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:47:00 PM

    Holy Cow!! ...and Wow! Extremely brilliant! I love this poem, Susan! It's my new FAV! Im quite surprised! Excellent! Congrats on your win in Chris' Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:06:00 PM

    Awesome to see you on this list. I got on the other list of his. not this one. BIG congrats, Susan. I love this one too.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Intense tho'ts....evil-lurking in his lust-filled eyes....whoa. Great analogy to bubble gum bc it's pretty cheap too! Congrats on your win, Susan. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning place xx

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:24:00 AM

    You've Said so much with so few words! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:25:00 AM

    LOL,YOU ARE A VERY INTERESTING AND INSPIRATIONAL WRITER! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 8:56:00 AM

    Wow Susan! So few words but definitely leaves an impact! I certainly enjoyed your metaphor here I think it's very unique using a bubble gum dispenser! Super congrats on your win :D!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 8:01:00 AM

    awesome poem, Susan. Enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris' "Be Yourself" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 11:13:00 AM

    ...lol...I sit and wonder how on earth did you get this unique "bubble" idea B.E.Susan. Well done - like it a lot. - Have a colorfull bubble day. - oxox love and smile from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:49:00 AM

    well that would certainly burst my bubble! cool write. Black eyed Susan. Thanks for your comment.

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 6:01:00 AM

    ha ha ha ,love it,gum talk,nice write B.Eyed.S

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:40:00 PM

    What great imagery, Susan. You are so clever with these short ones that you write! Love how you used Eye for I!! How is it going?

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:38:00 AM

    What a intense write stating exactly what is on your mind! I really enjoyed the moving piece Susan! I believe you said just what you wanted to say and did so masterfully! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:13:00 AM

    Intriguing, edgy little poem that says everything it needs to in so few words.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:53:00 AM

    Like it! Will chew on it a while.