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SHATTERED HEART

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Below is the poem entitled SHATTERED HEART which was written by poet Melanie Tan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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SHATTERED HEART

Shattered heart,
Veins apart,
Shattered heart,
Is just a start...

Trust of yolk has been taken away,
All hypes and vibes been shaken astray,
The emptiness of hate still won't go away,
Sunken cries goes on with betray.

Shattered heart oh shattered heart!
Thou your pieces is still at bay,
But mighty Healer,the great dart,
Will wash away the pain at hay!

Shattered heart,
Pain at start,
Shattered heart,
Rejoice at last...

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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 10:25:00 PM

    Really beautiful! "Trust of yolk taken away" is a very strong image! Well done

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/19/2012 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Michelle~!xoxo
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 8:41:00 PM

    What a beautiful and creative poem. I really enjoyed it...thank you so much for your compliments regarding my poem. Salute to your DAD too!!!!

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/19/2012 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Doreen..thank you for dropping by!Cheers!
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Beautiful poem written here Melanie..keep your pen steady!!!

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/19/2012 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will..Thank you.!
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 8:48:00 AM

    if one should ask me we should all REJOICE in the fact that we have a poet with the heart and soul it requires to write the above...but how about shattered dreams? signed a phan PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~