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  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:39:00 PM
    checking out one of your earlier post, glad i did, this is brilliant, and very very true....

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Christine is right. It's chilling and very possibly prophetic!! I saw you were a father over at Catie's blog. Happy father's day to you!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:31:00 PM
    Superb! What a chilling end, Marlon...Go get that top spot! :)

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Great entry...but personally, this is far from's fact in the US of A ! Good luck in the contest dear poet ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:02:00 PM
    Dang fam...intense, intense, intense!!!! 1ST PLACE Winner here!!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:40:00 AM
    Dr. Linton Bradley, this is a smashing nonet - it only reinforces that reality is stranger than fiction....cuz there is more than just imagination woven into this piece. Best wishes towards a win in nette's contest.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:15:00 AM
    dropping by to say hello to a friend poet... enjoy your day, M...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:34:00 AM
    "[...]the government/lured us in;/A mass/ Grave."!! The ending is superb, my friend! Best of luck in Nette's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 11:38:00 PM
    OOOOOOOOOH!!!!! WOOOOW! My eyes just got so huge when I read this and then I read it again. And then again. But, hey, if the governments doing it now I'm sure this will definitely apply to the future <3